tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.comments2016-01-16T13:13:46.624-08:00My original literary creationsRC Michhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02783921567712364984noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-33398388342491867322009-11-28T08:41:34.118-08:002009-11-28T08:41:34.118-08:00This story was very intresting indeed. You have a ...This story was very intresting indeed. You have a nice style of writing too. Very good storytelling techniques. I think you can dosome really good stories. Nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-56762452075571057752009-11-12T08:36:08.418-08:002009-11-12T08:36:08.418-08:00Yes, I agree, people shouldn't wait on someone...Yes, I agree, people shouldn't wait on someone they don't even know, but in this case, it was more of a mystical encounter. :)RC Michhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02783921567712364984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-63434894385698470152009-11-12T08:13:07.512-08:002009-11-12T08:13:07.512-08:00Amazing tale alright.. But its not wise to wait fo...Amazing tale alright.. But its not wise to wait for someone whom u have no idea of at all.... Better get a move on life...Blazehttp://www.blaze-point.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-17649437798212918962009-10-27T07:40:39.997-07:002009-10-27T07:40:39.997-07:00Wow that is a really good story. You should write ...Wow that is a really good story. You should write a book your really talented.Larrisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14579422925273521133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-2752218683484538872009-10-15T14:16:43.924-07:002009-10-15T14:16:43.924-07:00Hey! Your work is really awesome. Rain Drops is th...Hey! Your work is really awesome. Rain Drops is the best yet. You are really talented at describing things. Good Luck with future literature.<br /><br /><br />Your Best,<br /><br />YourBest123YourBest123http://mcproductions.bobhoil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-76420924983392083572009-10-14T17:25:58.068-07:002009-10-14T17:25:58.068-07:00maybe you could make it even scarier? the readers ...maybe you could make it even scarier? the readers should love the way their goosebumps stand :DUmar Vrathdarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16469499214791185035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-31559680976868445672009-10-08T04:19:20.060-07:002009-10-08T04:19:20.060-07:00This was a very interesting story. I enjoyed read...This was a very interesting story. I enjoyed reading through it.allthedmacnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-89424289062182186532009-10-01T12:53:43.737-07:002009-10-01T12:53:43.737-07:00The story starts with that old women telling those...The story starts with that old women telling those girls the story.I think that it would be better if you ended it up with the girls impression on the story or a conclusion(in order to be a frametale)...I don't know,maybe I'm wrong,but it's the oppinion of a reader.<br /><br />Anyway it's a wonderful story!I couldn't stop reading!<br />congratulations!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-78277277896127584182009-08-27T11:51:44.858-07:002009-08-27T11:51:44.858-07:00Not a bad story - well written, flows pretty well ...Not a bad story - well written, flows pretty well and doesn't have any major grammatical problems.<br /><br />One site (although it's a little quiet at the moment) where you can decent feedback is papertank.com - it's free..and they or I don't gain money by you joining! I've learnt a lot there....you can catch me there, I'm 'Simon' there.SimeyChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00697215215851798408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-28836114833198882682009-08-25T12:39:11.843-07:002009-08-25T12:39:11.843-07:00This is a very well thought-out story and keeps yo...This is a very well thought-out story and keeps you reading - it would make a good novel. Thanks for sharing it.MagicStarERhttp://websitesfreeforbeginners.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-29557047873947431742009-08-25T07:34:22.769-07:002009-08-25T07:34:22.769-07:00I love your site. It is well organized. Very good ...I love your site. It is well organized. Very good and excellent.<br />by<br />salvAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15404845693926407727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-51704079901508121002009-08-20T08:02:35.612-07:002009-08-20T08:02:35.612-07:00Your writing talent is not in questions-but your B...Your writing talent is not in questions-but your Blogger knowledge is.<br /><br />This site is way to "heavy' and will not load in the alloted time and dial up user can not even access it many times.<br /><br />There is no need to have the page so long-simply login,click on Settings and then click on Formatting and change it so only 1 or 2 posts are on the page at once.<br /><br />this allows you also to use each story or chapter as it's own site-much better for being found by surfers and Search Engines.<br /><br />You are to good for Blogspot-you need to get a real host and use your own domain name-it is much cheaper then you may think-and in fact it will pay for itself because you earn more form ads.<br />Please read <br /><a href="http://the-adsense-alternatives.com/free-hosting-the-real-costs" rel="nofollow">Free Hosting-the real costs</a>MrAdVenturehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05694746768919089378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-18206703055778459042009-08-19T16:50:28.188-07:002009-08-19T16:50:28.188-07:00dude...u are amazing...i read all of your little s...dude...u are amazing...i read all of your little storys...keep on the good work :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-62684915061447652722009-08-17T17:51:12.858-07:002009-08-17T17:51:12.858-07:00also, if I may add, this is one story with a very ...also, if I may add, this is one story with a very good lesson for everyone. i am looking forward for more posts and stories that with good morals and something that people could relate to. God bless! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-42530979359380057972009-08-17T17:49:36.350-07:002009-08-17T17:49:36.350-07:00You are indeed a passionate writer and congratulat...You are indeed a passionate writer and congratulations for this literary work... Keep it up and more power!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344346864020117566.post-76993980384999585442009-08-17T17:27:05.102-07:002009-08-17T17:27:05.102-07:00Great Story!Keep going.
I love romantic stories a...Great Story!Keep going.<br />I love romantic stories and with a happy end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com